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Thursday, August 13, 2015

Kitten story

My lovely kitten story

One day there was a kitten named Little Cute Cat. She was in a fire and she sadly got unconscious. Then a firefighter came to save the kitten. He picked the kitten up and took him outside and did something weird. He pot water on the kitten and gave him oxygen. Then he came back alive! I saw it, it was crazy.

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2 comments:

  1. Mrs SpraggAugust 13, 2015 at 7:48 PM

    Thanks for sharing your story Rivah. Something to keep an eye on is your pronouns. At the start of the story the kitten is a girl and then she turns into a boy. I'm glad s/he was ok.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2015 at 9:19 AM

    The story was really good but some of the spelling words were incorrect.
    Can you please work on your spelling cause I didn't really get it but I got some of it.
    I really liked the story and it was really amazing.

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